Thursday, 1 December 2016

One page pitch for thriller opening


One Page Pitch

Working title: Droplet

Film Genre: Forensic Thriller

Length: 123 minutes 47 seconds

Target Audience: 18- 41 year olds

Tag line: How many droplets does it take to create a puddle?

What if premise: Alice was an ordinary girl during her childhood and lived a very family orientated life.  She was a sister of three and was the middle child, often forgotten or left behind.  She was always the normal one, from the outside, but inside was a completely different story; possessed by the thought of power a new serial killer was unveiled.

The story synopsis: As a result of Alice’s troubled past, her coping mechanism was an abstract way and certainly not an ideal one.  The thought of control and power took over her inhibitions and there was born the serial killer, the only time she could feel a sense of power was stood over someone watching them take their final breaths.

Statement of intent: To raise awareness of neglect and noticing the signs of inside suffering.  It is a film to show how quickly situations like this can escalate without the right without the right kind of attention and I feel that if this storyline was portrayed in a television drama it would show that it takes a lot longer for these emotions to build up whereas I want to show just how quick these feelings can come.

Visual realisation: This film will be very tense and eerie thriller, with lots of clues dropped throughout and many false leads.  This film will have a slow pace juxtaposing many other films of this genre.  Another way this film is going to juxtapose others is because I’m going to try and make the audience have a sense of compassion and lovingness for Alice, and make her completely unsuspected throughout; giving it a sense of realism that it can happen to anyone and that no-one is born evil.

Audience appeal: Quite a lot of the target audience will be parents or if not potential parents.  They will be able to relate to many of the situations the fact that within parenthood there are struggles but you can’t afford to push your family away as it will only make things worse, they will feel a sense of sympathy for Alice and her situation as they would never want that for their own, this will then create a consciousness within themselves and will ensure that the same situation would never occur for them.